-direct copy from Gj-
I get a big kick out of reading
randomsome1's horror work stories and figured I'd share one of the more memorable ones that had happened to me over the week.
I'm in the bridal department of the store when I hear glass crash and a little boy go "oh crap!". I immediately rush over, fearful that I'll find a bloody kid and a sue-happy mother standing over him. I see a kid who isn't covered in blood (thankfully) but he's on his bare knees and hands in broken glass.
"Sorry! It just rolled off! I swear!" Yeah, sure kid. I notice a woman in the aisle, but she's not even looking at the boy as her attention is heavily on some sortive bridal thing. I assume that she isn't his mother then. So I tell the kid, "Sweetie, don't kneel on the ground, there's glass. No, no. It's fine, I can clean it up, don't worry." I make sure he's fine and as I go to pick up the bigger pieces, to my shock and amazement, he goes over to the woman and says "So whatcha lookin' at, Mom?".
My mouth just about dropped. Glass broke, kid's kneeling in it, and she doesn't even turn around? Not even a reprimand?! If I was that mother, I'd be all "Hun, you okay? Good. DON'T TOUCH THE GLASS."
So I go into the back stock room and relay this horror story to my co-worker. He simply shook his head and replied, "I worked at a jail for about twenty years. Thought I saw it all. Two years in retail, I've seen shit even worse than what I've seen in there [jail]." How disgusting is that?
In other news, I have a bit of a predicament. We've already exchanged first chapters 'n at. Thankfully, it really made me pay attention to what I'm neglecting (adults, for one). But it brought up a huge issue;
My story revolves around a band in Alabama. They think they're good, their school thinks they're good, but they aren't. Their lyrics are mediocre and the music itself isn't that stellar. Only they don't realize it (at least until a jerk shows up in a future chapter to set them in their place). And that's one of the story's main focus, is to better the band.
Problem is... how do I convey this? If the POVs think their music is great and their surrounding peers think it's great... Well, I should say, how exactly can I approach this issue with the reader? They're gonna read the mediocre lyrics and probably think 'wow, this is crap' and possibly loose interest in the story. Halp?
Ah, and by the way, I'm over at
InsaneJournal too. I suggest that you who haven't made a back-up account at Ij do so. Gj might not be around in the future...